Friday, September 28, 2012

Writing Journal

9-28-12:
Blackmail and English Essays:
Ok, the girls should be up in San Fransisco visiting the Chinese theater when they realize that Xue is there, visiting her family and telling them about the money and education she will receive when she gets her blackmail cut. She tells them she didn't want to blackmail, but Rifle tipped her off.

I'm gonna reveal this one slowly, over the corner of the weekend. Put lots of foreshadowing and shit in. Have fun, entertain, don't be racist!
  • My thinking behind this is that I have to keep it believable. It has to be convincing and throw tons of character development in, add plotlines and shit like that as an excuse for not deducing.
  • Using 'A stress fracture that went untreated' as the disease that forced 'Me' to give up volleyball and sports for academics. At the same time I met AI, who was running Leadership council.
  • I want to make my characters relatable, adapt everyday scenarios into real life. Something I need to do to prove my intelligence.
  • REVEAL CHINESE CIRCUS THING SATURDAY NIGHT OR SUNDAY MORNING.
9-29-12:
Blackmail and English Essays:
Found 3 possible Chinese theaters. We have 2 hours to find her, or she'll post the pictures (Id didn't mention that yet). Getting a pictures of the theater for tumblr.
  • Told Still-holding-minas-tirith we lived in San Fransisco. (Me all my life). Told her I didn't realize it was so dangerous until I met CE. Think I'll use this as a metaphor for growing up and losing innocence.
Just told "Still-holding-minas-tirth" that Rifle told Xue to look on the computer and to use the computer as blackmail material. (So that she could get money for her family and go to college. BUT NOT REVEALED YET)
  • I think EVENTUALLY I will have CE have some kind of 'The Hound Of Baskervill" style freakout. But I should probably cement the whole "No emotions" thing first.
  • Wrote the whole thing about how Xue got the information from Rifle.
  • Just watched Mean Girls and considering having Rifle have a 'Burn Book' full of secrets.
  • Slenderlock just told me the best thing-"Most people refuse to see reason- there’d have to be absolute proof, and even then they like to ignore it. But there will always be people out there who can see the truth- it’s about finding them."
  • Ok, so now we know that Rifle knows what the fucks going on. He's clever, and keeps a well done appearance so no one suspects him. I hope to create a character(s), that are not only believable but can provide an outlet onto real life. They can be relatable and clever and snotty and human. Really human. A big theme I'm trying to make is that no one is unbreakable, and if you think you are, you haven't been tested yet. I think once people read my writing more they'll get a better vibe for what I write and be able to read it like it sounds in my head.
  • Got first case. Girl in Argentina wants help finding her friends father. This should be good, I hope he's ok. :)
  • No one appreciates my over enthusiasm that I have been asked to help find a missing person. So I said :"The game, bitch! Is on!"No one appreciates my weirdness........
  • I'm so excited an honored that someone has come to ME asking me for advice. Consulting me. It makes me feel important to even smally help someone. :)
9-30-12:
Asked for free deductions on the blog, spot on. I'm so clever :)
  • Saw a great quote by an unknown person to cheer me up when I'm down:
    The loneliest people are the kindest. The saddest people smile the brightest. The most damaged people are the wisest. All because they do not wish to see anyone else suffer the way they do.This is only to true, you are the kindest.
10-6-12:
Have this idea for a great crime. Rifle should commit Arson. He should be whistling and have that sort of non-chilant Moriarty-ness about him. He should burn an old hotel. But not a well-known one.
  • Making a story called "The ______ Letter". Like the 'Scarlet Letter' but with another color instead of scarlet.The Crimson Letter; maybe I should have a gold letter inside it. Or a clue from Rifle. Maybe an 'Alchemical Symbol'. Like a Green Lion or something. Sulfur symbol.











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